My poem: Cold places (read at the open mic on 10/19/10 ♥)
Emma:
[your poem....
i love it. i love the imagery and the story line. i love your style of writing. its sophisticated bt not to the point where i have to read it 10 tens to get the meaning. i love the flow and how your ideas progress and evolve. i love the romantic twist and how its so different from most love poems. theres just so many different components to this. Starting off frozen and insecure then having someone come into your life who completes you and in the process sets you free to truly be yourself. i love how it shows how you guys complement each other; a truly beautiful piece. ]
Thats all I needed to like you more then most people lol But it doesn't hurt that you are awesome
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